Lyle Stark Aka Iron Prodigy

Stark's Extremis Virus:

The Stark Extremis virus is a bio-electronics package, fitted into a few billion graphite nanotubes and suspended in a carrier fluid. It hacks the body's repair center. The part of the brain that keeps a complete blue print of the human body. When we're injured, we refer to that area of the brain to heal properly. Extremis rewrites that repair center. Thus allowing Extremis to create new and improved organs.

Extremis also effects Lyle in a mental capacity, allowing him to process information at light speed, on a subconscious level.This was gained from the direct psuedo-telepatching connection he had formed with all technology including his suits.

The hacking of the human body via the Extremis virus allows for super heating of the nanotubes inside the body. The advanced healing process combined with this allows the body to super heat itself to temps close to the sun without burning to death. It also allows for rapid explusion of stomach contents as super heated molten liquid.

Weakness:
The Extremis virus rapid information intake has a subtle set back in which Lyle will suffer from flash backs in regards to deaths he may have caused. These include the death of his father as well as one of his Mentor's Hawkeye.

He will often suffer from crippling flash backs from various triggers which he offsets with rapid intake of drugs and booze.

While the Extremis Virus does have a rapid healing factor if the brain is completely destroyed along with the rest of his body he won't be able to regenerate on the spot.

While being of enhanced mental structures as well as the heat based powers. He is of above normal human strength comparable to an NBA players. He is still human in the basic sense of the term.

The EXTREMIS Virus is capable of being hacked into by outsiders. But this ability is held by noone on earth. The Only beings capable of doing this were the Skrull.



Anything He makes from this point forward.

Okay, I know I'm not a staff member, but I don't want an application that uses electronics heavily, but ignores the basics of electronics, to get approved. So, starting off with a few basic things.

A. Unless you bring proof that graphite is a semiconductor, your virus disregards physics. There is a reason the computer industry uses silicon you know.

B. Why do you not have any weakness to electrical and/or technological powers? A strong enough electrical user could short circuit the virus, while someone with a more controlled electric power could overwrite the current code, making them do what the electric user wants. technological user can just edit the virus to do the same as the electric user.

Fix the physics side of things before anything else...

NekoTina wrote:

Okay, I know I'm not a staff member, but I don't want an application that uses electronics heavily, but ignores the basics of electronics, to get approved. So, starting off with a few basic things.

A. Unless you bring proof that graphite is a semiconductor, your virus disregards physics. There is a reason the computer industry uses silicon you know.

B. Why do you not have any weakness to electrical and/or technological powers? A strong enough electrical user could short circuit the virus, while someone with a more controlled electric power could overwrite the current code, making them do what the electric user wants. technological user can just edit the virus to do the same as the electric user.

Fix the physics side of things before anything else...

This is why I dislike people who don't read the comics. The Extremis Virus is Cannon. I don't need to explain it. It just is.

Allelujah Haptism wrote:

NekoTina wrote:

Okay, I know I'm not a staff member, but I don't want an application that uses electronics heavily, but ignores the basics of electronics, to get approved. So, starting off with a few basic things.

A. Unless you bring proof that graphite is a semiconductor, your virus disregards physics. There is a reason the computer industry uses silicon you know.

B. Why do you not have any weakness to electrical and/or technological powers? A strong enough electrical user could short circuit the virus, while someone with a more controlled electric power could overwrite the current code, making them do what the electric user wants. technological user can just edit the virus to do the same as the electric user.

Fix the physics side of things before anything else...

This is why I dislike people who don't read the comics. The Extremis Virus is Cannon. I don't need to explain it. It just is.

Then why did you attempt to explain it in the first place? You can't expect everyone to have read every issue of every superhero comic, or have total knowledge of the canon universe. Why did you not just copy directly from the marvel wiki, that way there is less chance of confusion? Also, according to the marvel wiki (http://marvel.wikia.com/Extremis_virus), the extremis virus does not boost mental capacities, and you seem to downplay the boost of strength ("The extent appears to vary within marginal limits, but most have demonstrated the ability to hoist the weight of a human male effortlessly in one hand and hurl such a weight across a room." -marvel wikia page). Also, why no weakness to technology manipulation based powers? It is a technology product, and therefore any powers affecting technology would affect the virus itself.

It's a bio-Tech virus. basically improves my body while keeping me human. It has no control over my actual body it just improves my brain and organs and makes me a technomancer in a sort of way. Secondly it does increase the mental processes of the person. I actually read the entire extremis story line so i posted that from memory. Rather then relying on the wiki why not read the comics. This is the same thing i said to Keten about not knowing shit about speedsters.

First off I expect to be re banned but sticking up for Tina when you're being a douchenozzle is worth it. One she is pointing out key flaws while not knowing the comic style shows she is trying to help you and you shouldn't be a damn dick, two you don't even include the major flaws or Extremis, the super aggression like with spiderman and the symboite, how it over works the brain with the light speed calculations resulting in major hallucinations that often manifest in the forms over crippling guilt from parts of the mind that lock bad things away, how extremis can only affect 2.5% of the world and you're magically it when tony was barely it, and lastly how easily the skrulls over wrote the virus proving it is vulnerable to being hacked, so you could be counter technomanced. Now I'm not as nice as Tina so I'll tell you from the stand point of a kid who fucking read this comic line and is die hard iron man that this app is utter bullshit just like your others and you're lucky these people are as nice as they are because anywhere else you would be getting laughed at for this shit poor effort, and insulting a member here that is only trying to help you proves that you should have stayed banned because all of your characters are "god like tiered" which means they are unbeatable and it explains why no one wants to rp with you, Lastly if Keten got into it with you then you deserved it cause from what I know of him he is reserved and doesn't have a problem with anyone, now thank Tina and fix your fucking app instead of whining and bitching. Have a good night.

Well I came here to check an app but it seems these two have pointed out the major stuff. Please fix these points before being approved.

Also I would appreciate it if you give me a more thorough history and background